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Our nation is one that has been founded on the basis that every man and woman was created equal and that they should be treated equal. That did even begin to happen until 1963 when martin luther king stated that men should not be judged by color of skin but by content of character. Martin luther kings speech was groundbreaking then its effects are still being felt today for many reasons.
Our nation is failing. When the forgers of the Constitution were drawing the famous document up they did not dream of the country we live in today. Though we have made progress and done lots of go0d things, with the state of politics and other contributor’s it seems more bad than good is happening. In my opinion political corruption will ultimately destroy our country like a snake eating a mouse.
Thesis:
I think that because of the way the ecomny is we should be looking into the future with grave concern because we are in a heavy and complex war, many business’s are failing, and the goverment is running out of money to spend.
Since the war against terrorism is draining the economy we need to begin pulling out of Iraq and strengthen our borders.
the thesis of an essay includes facts and can bring out emotions. I need to learn how to convey the my main topics and produce a quailty product by not being lazy.
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Our nation is failing. When the forgers of the Constitution were drawing the famous document up they did not dream of the country we live in today. Though we have made progress and done lots of go0d things, with the state of politics and other contributor’s it seems more bad than good is happening. In my opinion political corruption will ultimately destroy our country like a snake engulfing a mouse.
Political corruption in many forms has begun to creep into our executive and legislative branches with the greed and coercion of a criminal. I believe drastic reform is necessary to save our country. Publicly funded elections in recent years have been bought by special interest groups that only have poor morals and only their interests at hand. When a candidate runs for office he must win an election to be able to take office. A proper election requires debates and getting ones name and policies in the publics mind. In recent years elections have been one by the candidate that spent the most money. So a candidate can ask people for money and promise their legislation and agendas will be approved.
